The final rhyme was immaculate. Love it! "melt" and "else"--they don't both occur at the end of lines, which makes it a very subtle effect. Very nicely done. All those things are true, too; I can tell you are deeply faithful by your poetry and how much you really believe in love. Optimism is refreshing here at Fictionpress! (Wait until you see all the terrible suicide poetry that's posted on this site! *shudder*) Good work! ~MJ