Nice!! Thanks for all your reviews. This is a good poem. Really reflects what I'm feeling now. You can tell from my poems..haha..keep it up.

wow, amazing poem! i like it a lot a lot. you shoulda posted when you wrote it though *looks at the date* anyways, ;) nice work and thanks for the reviews.

Maybe just "Tears" would be a good title. You think? Hmm. I dunno, but I've felt like this, too--when you just want to cry because you realize that all you mean in the long run is basically dust in the wind? Yes, it seems that way sometimes. But if you think about it, that's cheerful, too--because then there's not so much pressure for you to do the right thing, because it doesn't matter anyway.
Well, enough with philosophy; this poem was very evocative; it was abstract and you kind of felt like you were floating around, which helped the meaning, I thought. Very nice work! ~MJ