sorry you feel that way, great poem by the way, if i knew you I would be your friend...a guy thats not afraid to cry...I like that

i'd rather be an outcast with everybody than how i am now... the lonelyness never leaves

I can relate to that, though I am sure you ahve heard that a lot I like it a lot you are a very talented writer.

i know the feeling. the feeling sucks

I really like the repitition in this poem and the morbidness of it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.

Em... as with all other poems by you, morbid, and really pointless since I know who you are. It's okay, but really, if you can, try to give it a rhythm, if not a rhyme. And about a land ruled by no one, governed by all? Trust me, you don't want that. Judges is a book on that and when people do what they want, when they want, often things don't turn out too well.

i like the way you repeated certain phrases and words (like why,sob, no one) to really emphasize what you feel.
But it really sounds very sad... :(
remember you still have your friends for Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly. Take care~!