Nothing more profound,

Than a little thing provoked,

Deep inside our soul. —m—

not bad. keep writing.
(Bri says she has stretch marks on her butt cheeks. Don't ask. she wanted someone to know that lol)
Caitlin Serene Schendel

Nice, I liked it. Its nice to read something that is somehow joyful, instead of depressive as most things have gotten on this site.
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Fascination with reality is a very original concept for a poem. Most people seem only to write about how much reality sucks.
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Good job. I commend you. ^_^