 avidelecteur 2004-07-12 . chapter 1 Oops, didn't mean to hit Submit Review... Oh, well. As I was saying, I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this- it looks like it's going to shape up perfectly. Really well written, quite moving already, and I'm sure it will only get better. This is now on my Favorite Stories list... Write quickly!
~avidelecteur
PS- I'm assuming you were talking to a different Sharon, somehow... hehe... You don't suppose this story is a little bit biographical, perhaps? You must miss her a lot. :( I'm sure she'll keep in touch, though. |
 avidelecteur 2004-07-12 . chapter 2Wow. You must play piano... I never knew that. |
 Bandbingo 2004-06-27 . chapter 2wow, good job! i know exactly what this is based on! i can't wait for the next chapter! i think that i also know how you got the names! |
 Juliet Squared 2004-06-18 . chapter 2Quite a lot is based on real life. And yes, I do make a lot of typos...shall fix this eventually, no worries! |
 pennydeath 2004-06-17 . chapter 2Sweet and all, but...typos, m'dear, typos... you have a lot of sentences ending with commas and I don't think it's supposed to be "Band, or any class for that matter, would be quite the same without her friend." (would never be quite the same).
...How much of this is based on life? |
 Silent Star4 2004-06-17 . chapter 2Nicely written, and I really do like the metaphore to the song though. If you'll accept a critique though maybe you shouldn't make it so much just like real life, it is supposed to be fiction. It's still good though, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
 tigress moon 2004-06-16 . chapter 2 nifty...i like how you used inundate, the english vocab word. ^_o |
 rhapsodyinpurple 2004-06-15 . chapter 2OMG, OMG... I was crying the whole way through this chapter. It is so realistic to me, with all of our little quirks and such! OMG, I'm gonna miss you so much. Strange how the characters sound so much like us...OMG. wOOy, wOw. That is crazy. I like how my character is always saying "no joke" just like I do. I love you like a sister! I can't wait for the rest of the story! |
 rhapsodyinpurple 2004-06-13 . chapter 1OMG! This sounds just like you finding the Bridge Over Troubled Water music! And Lydia is your other name! wOOy! That's crazy awesome! Love it lots! Can't wait for more... |
 tigress moon 2004-06-12 . chapter 1 cool, as i said before. and no more bitterweet! :P |
 Krazy Krizz 2004-06-12 . chapter 1nicce...its short though... |