i like this one a lot! its something im sure we can all relate to...why do people care about us if we're these idiotic teenagers that are usually the last ones to be respected? well, you did a great job at expressing these feelings. Great poem!

okay... you have to clear something up in my mind here, when you said "did you really mean it when you said you would be there forever" you weren't talking about SCHRAGER were you? great poem, but a very wrong thing/boy to be writing about. ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew, lol
awsome job
~ky