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| anon 2007-04-28 ch 2, anon. | abuse"happened is not medically correct" hey I appreciate that you informed the readers, but props to you for not going to the bother of researching all that medical stuff, because lets be ahonest here, in the time that would have taken you could have gotten another interesting chappie written, yay priorities :D |
| iced_wine 2006-07-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseinteresting story. please update soon! |
| blackberry33 2006-07-23 ch 8,  | abuseUPDATE NOW! haha, WOW. i |
| MonkeyMohawk1 2006-03-12 ch 8, | abuseupdate stranger...very good story!...i wanna know what happens next so plz dont keep me waiting...sadly im impatient and yes i know its a bad habit that i must get rid of...and i will when i ever get around to it...*cough*...yea so update!! |
| clooless 2006-01-01 ch 8, | abuseoh. My. GAWD! I can't believe you didn't finish this! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me you were just on a long haitus and that you are contining this. WHO the HELL is paul?? |
| [a] 2005-09-15 ch 8, anon. | abusegreat you just had to leave it with a cliff hanger!! whos paul? aww update please this is a cool story!! |
| marina eyes 2005-08-27 ch 8, anon. | abusewhy haven't you updated? this is an awesome story |
| random 2005-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease update where are you? ah you cant leave me hanging! ;'[ |
| ohayo 2005-07-10 ch 8, anon. | abusePlease updatePLEASE TT^TT |
| Lily-007 2005-05-10 ch 8, | abuseGO GO GIRL GO UPDATE !I want to know who's the guy!I wonder if he's an ex boyfriend, or something like that who might have betrayed our girl with this suck up san * gr *So now you'll think i'm high lol but i'm not ! * pout * Angry at you for the cliff'^^ lolTill the next time ;) Keep on girl^^ |
| Grape 2005-02-28 ch 8, | abuseHey! This is a really good story. You sometimes miss words in sentances and thats a little confusing, but I like what you have going! I like the characters, they are really cool!! I was just wondering, in like the second chapter, you mentioned Jared playing a Playstation, how can a blind person do that?! Anyways this is great!! I hope you post the next chapter soon. |
| Satan's Angelic Mistress 2005-01-06 ch 8, | abuseOi! Hurry up and update...who's paul?!?!?!?!?!?! |
| irishgurl 2004-12-20 ch 8, | abuseWHOS PAUL? I know you know, but I want to know! Please?By the way, awsome story so far! Please, please, please update soon?! |
| B.T. Lines 2004-12-17 ch 8, | abusePlease, please, please, please, please, pease, please, please, please, please, please, pease, please, please, please, please, please, pease, please, please, please, please, pease, please, please finish this story! |
| B.T. Lines 2004-12-17 ch 3, | abuseHow does a blind person play playstation? You might want to re-read this chapter and fix that part. I do like the story line alot so far. |