I don't know how to explain it, but I could feel it in my veins that there's something weird about this story. Like there's lack of something, I don't know. I'm sorry, I'm not the best reviewer on earth.

oh gosh, that just about broke my heart. It was beautifully written and the plot was lovely. Hauntingly so. A gorgeous story. You should be proud. =]

aw pls pls pls!! i always come back to read this! its like asking for pain!! really good though.. i sincerely beg *:))* pls do a followup!! i can't stand it they didn't end up together! sobs

anyways.. like always, everything you write is magic!

realy liked it. it was sad, but still nice, you know? turn it into a story!!

=(
how sad!

So much emotion was in this story. The heartbreak was really well written, and I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Though I do like happy endings more. :) Great job.

I loved it. Wasn't the usual cliche which made it much more better.

-moon.endless

OMFG! That was great.
the whole thing was incredible.

Please write a sequel to this! It's amazing, and you left me hanging!

loved it.
Pure and simple.
most people are writing happy endings, it gets too obvious, don't you think?

that sucks! why did you leave it like that?! ARGH

YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUAL ONESHOT!! YOU MUST!! YOU CAN'T JUST END IT LIKE THIS!

That was so sad...Tears are threatening to fall from my eyes too. Shame on you! Haha, good job!

oh Jesus (sorry if your catholic) that was so sad.

does he even know that he loves her?

oh man this was so sad it made me cry :(
i think you should write another one shot sequel about them meeting in the future
i know its been a couple years since this one was written but i still think it's a good idea
you're a great writer :)