There are a lot of sad poems on the site but very few are good. This one is. The rhythm is very good and the rhymes actually rhyme. It also has a very powerful message. Nice job.

Gosh, you are one depressed girl! I really hope this isn't how you feel...if it is please talk to me, I've been through it and I can help...this poem is awesome!

wow i like that alot alot alot alot its really good keep up the good work