I reward mine regularly

your respective mothers', as well

:)

LMAO! That was TOO CUTE! I loved it. Seriously.

I think one of my favorite lines (and being a girl I understand this completely):

"Always smacked,
Always whacked."

LOL! This was a cute poem. I really enjoyed it.

so funny lol
love it ! :-)
lola

to me this one has a meaning that i dont seem to get @_@; i'm really dense sometimes, but your work is very good!! ^_^ i liked the repition of 'Always' in the second stanza.

~rira-chan

P.s thank you for your reveiw and your advice in your reveiw. ^^ keep on writing!

Hahaah. Great poem. (:

that was really cute and original. i liked it a bunch!

very cute! Yes, I think they feel very neglected down there...lol. cool poem.

~birdytamell~

Haha! LOL! That was a cute poem! You have some really good sense of humor. Hehe! Anyways, yeah poor bottoms! LOL!

you suck. that was incredibly pointless

haha jane this is crazy. and terribly funny. light and fun. keep it up! you write great.write more poems (:

"Always facing the wrong wayAlways forced to look backAlways smacked,Always whacked."

I just LOVE this stanza. 'Always facing the wrong way'. ogosh. HAHAHA. :D

hi, very cute and refreshing! i like it, it's the first poem i ve read of anything about bottoms!, very original and sincere! and real !

I think the usage of "day" twice in "Slogging all day" and "Just sat upon each day" kinda marrs the rhythm of the poem, since the 'day used at the slogging part isn't supposed to ryhme, perhaps use 'all the time'? Anyway, the repetition of 'always' in the second stanza to emphasise the constancy the bottom is treated poorly is pretty strong. A wonderfully light tone about the subject and creative! Keep it up, mate!

Ah. Love this idea! I've never really thought about it that way... *sighs* oh, my poor bottom. Maybe I ought to give my bottom some rest and sit on my stomach instead?

I liked it. I would personally love it if it was more uniform. First it's the second and last line that rhyme, then again, then it's the third and last. Otherwise, I liked it.
Sparklypiggy

hey jointedlegs... did u mean disjointed legs?? anyway, thought it was an interesting topic to write about. Bottoms... up!!