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| End Of The Innocence 2004-07-16 ch 1,   | You might want to add some commas. :laughs: Just kidding. I love this one. The imagery is impecable. :thumbs up: once again. |
| existentialist-sucker 2004-06-20 ch 1, | I hate summer. But you've described the season with such beauty. [BabY Gia] |
| Nadia20 2004-06-19 ch 1, | I could just feel the humidity..emotion came from every word. :) |
| Summerdazed 2004-06-17 ch 1, | it's perfect. ^_^ =summerdazed= |
| Ravens Cross 2004-06-13 ch 1, | Absolutly beautiful! The visuals in this piece are magnificent. I love the rain too. There is just a certain calm it seems to bring to the world. The sound is one of true comfort and the release it gives (well, the release it gives to me) can take away any problem that you may face. Just soak it up with the rain. Wonderful! |
| mysterious-muse 2004-06-13 ch 1, | I love it! |
| Tommy2007 2004-06-13 ch 1, | This poem beautifully expresses your emotions, It's very good. |
| FaydedMarionette 2004-06-13 ch 1, | Beautiful as always. The last two lines though, they dont seem like they fit as "right" with the rest of the poem. Or maybe thats just the tired talking. Summer rain is indeed a wonderful thing. Or it would be if i liked water. I hate water |