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| DameNoire 2004-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseNice. I like the rhymescheme (is that a word?) Anyway, sometimes your poem rhymed on places I did not expect it too and I liked that. "Now I understand why Mum said never to cycle at night." Brilliant! That was SO funny. -x- DameNoire |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuseNeat poem. Hope the broken bones are metaphorical. ~m~ |
| charmaine` 2004-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's okay lah, quite funny, humorous, damn comical. Pretty retarded though. I like the last verse. |
| nasake-suneku 2004-06-14 ch 1, | abuseOww... LMAO, good poem. Wanna know something funny? I thought this poem was about a period :D L8er, Tiffany M. |
| CL Caudle 2004-06-14 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, and nice way to end it. Also, good message to young kids :) Nice poem, keep writing! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abusehehehe i like it! wonderful poem! |
| cara 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's belly good. really. |