Hmm. Very interesting. I like that it's almost a sort of dialogue. I'm a little confused by the ending, however. It's still very good, though.

cool, insulting poem.
I like it very much.
the theory of jump and catch, blending the prodding of peer pressure.
and what do we face so much of, these days?
hm?
That's right!
exactly what you wrote about.

I like the flow and format of this. The single word lines however seem a bit unnecessary...or that there should be something extra to it. Just my two cents.

This confuses me... is the person talking supposed to be supportive or one of those evil 'go get yourself killed' type of friends (remind you of anyone?)?
But I do like the part, 'Just know that I'll always catch you.' reminds me of Inuyasha. Grouchy on the outside, all fuzzy on the inside.
Anyway, nice job!
LG
Oh yeah! I almost got the horse poem up, bear with me in the wait.