nice. A bit satrical, I like it a lot. sorry it took me so long to review for you...

This is good. I havn't really reveiwed yuo in a while either.

Wow...very deep...yet very awesome. I love those last two lines (So dance with me/the dance of death...) because they end the poem so perfectly.

wow... very creepy ending... nice metaphor for being cheated on... awesome song

This reminds me of a line in one of Shakira's songs, 'Objection' where it says "Tango is not for three
Was never meant to be" I liked the song, very different very good. Good job.

wow, its so romantic and deathly (is that even a word) at the same time! hehe! i love it! especially the chorus