Wow... powerful... I've been reading your stuff, I really really enjoy it. This last one I can kind of relate to in my own ways... I'd love to add you to my favorites list, and I just got here like a few days ago. And now my email's broken, so that stinks... but I will keep reading your stuff! Thank you for commenting on me, new and all. Keep writing so I can keep reading! It is wonderful

I...like the ending. To the poem, that is. But it won't be the way things turn out in reality. You're stronger than him, luv. You don't have to be hurt by him constantly. Just...don't give in. Okay?
I love you.

That truly is saddening, and very well written, too.

One of these days I am going to create the perfect word to describe your writing. Until then I will just applaud and await the publication of your book

i think imma cry *sniff*! ... that was... was... emotional for sure. was a great poem. just very touching (as you can see from my recent songs and all)... hits really close to home, as you put it. just wow... omg... i know what you mean, its like, you feel that youre just ruining his life and wonder why in gods name did he chose you. and you want him to just hold you and tell you its all ok but you want him to stay away so you dont hurt him anymore. same thing im going thru with my bro... same thing... (as you saw). but yeah. my ramblings here... *sniff* that was very touching. and all i can say is that youre not forgotten, youre an amazing writer with amazing talent and we (well i cant speka for everyone but ill asume i can, lol) love you and all. wonderufl writings and keep up letting the emotions out, feels much better afterwards girl ;) *HUGS!*
Tara