YOU MUST UPDATE! heh. Hm. Anyway very good. I love it so far. Please follow the advice is big capital letters at the beginning of the review at the soonest possible time. Thank You.

We! that was really good! You should update...like soon and i will try and be nice and update. you can read uhm my poem...granted it won't last long but i'm trying to write fast. Okay good. good.

Not trying to pick but alot of times when you're referring to the whole group you might want to consider using saw instead of seen. Just a suggestion other than that it looks really really good

hehehe sorry bout long bouts in shelter. However i am working on chap. 10. Anywho this is already really good. I like it just the right amount of information and suspense. *hops to next chapter*

dude, great chapter. I love the name Teagan, update soon!
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Ashley

Dude, where's all your reviewers. You should have a million and a half reviews for the last chapter. That's not cool. GREAT job with this chap, btw! Amazing...
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Ashley

I think that this story has great potential and I can't wait to read more. I feel terrible for these kids, they don't deserve to be treated the way there were being treated. they should definitely try to escape!
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Ashley