I missed reading your works... the imagery is priceless. Here is no different... I liked the end, especially. Great job, overall!

~Lidless Eye

o, very sad, love the last line, beautifully done

wow, that's amazing ~ it was almost like a movie atmosphere! definitely sucked me in. it was fun to interpret this one, as well. ;) as per usual, i loved all of it, but there were a couple sections that need to be glorified, methinks:

"bold as/thunder" ~ just the positioning of that, and the awesome simplicity, hit me.

"the rain falls apart/and we are falling/together" ~ i really loved the way you used movement to create that concept, it was great.

fantastic work as always, and i love your new name! it rocks! ;) kudos!

Very interesting. Reminded me of Jane Eyre a little bit. Not my favorite book of all time, must be said, but now at least it came in handy. Beautifully written as always with a fantastic ending. Hope things are looking brighter for you.
P.S. I read your review for I Am Hitler. Very sweet of you to say. Certainly brightened my day.

The first part of this reminded me strongly of the Holocaust, especially the first stanza, and I liked how you compared that and applied it to love. The rain parts were also wonderful imagery and created strong pictures, but nothing as much so as those last two lines - those were like 'WOW!!' Very, very powerful. Wonderfully written!
~ CoolBeans18s

I like it.. very well done

it kinda reminsd me of the Holocaust but maybe thats just me! It was really good...I liked the line "the rain falls apart"...its all WOOSH!
Henna