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Anne is nitpicky 2005-09-12 . chapter 16
actually, now that i think of it, i probably would've gotten 3 extra points in the Lyric Recognition section because I LOVE GREEN DAY!

BILLIE JOE LOVES ME! (hey, you made him say it to Hype in TAOL Games, don't blame me)

i'm just nitpicking and being bored. so shoot me. *bang* OW!
Fedora Jim 2005-06-09 . chapter 19
NO! NOT DISCONTINUED! oh well, just update TAOL games someday, OK?

and to ciara, whose review i just read: Emily quit? is there room for me now? jk, i can't play guitar :|
ciara 2005-03-20 . chapter 18
hi joe!! it's ciara!awesome story... tons of dialogue...Why amn't i in it!

p.s emily just quit the band
Rhiannon Aurorafai 2005-01-10 . chapter 5
Hi~K, now im worried about ur and Anne's sanity. First of all, u r way way way way way way way way way wayway way way way wayway way way way wayway way way way way too protective about ur hair! All of the bagillion of u there are in this story. But, everyone needs a hobby so...Now for anne, what were u thinking giving her a stick of dynamite and a lot of candy?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!!?!?!?!?! u should know better than that! Also, ru sick or something or r u just faking so u can skip finals? well...Katie the true bob and not the bob on Hype's left hand thats really nasty and ugly!
Rhiannon Aurorafai 2005-01-07 . chapter 18
K, first of all, my name is awesome! It doesn't suit me at all but it has a hidden meaning that only my friend Liz knows cause we're special, just like Fred, but in our own little way, Just like anne, but in our own little way, just like...well, yall get the point. Yes, i did just say yall. i lived in Kentucky once apon a time. My little Livey is still there! Aww, now i miss her. Damn. Now, EEW! Joe kissed Hype! Hint hint wink wink. Nothing more said. Interesting interesting. Now, where's my character? huh? huh? huh? huh? huh? WEll?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? yeah, thats what i thought.*and after 10 minutes of nonsensical illogical funkyness, im done.Woopee! finals! yeah, i scream less than enthusiastic. At least we have minimum days and a 5 day weekend. But thats gonna be boring. Jeez. We cant find a medium, can we? hmm no. *Other tem minutes of rambling, i promise ill stop talking.*'NOT!WEll, maybe i will. K im done.Katie the girl whose pen name is totally awesome!Anne, enough said. See u on monday. maybe. Stupid teachers.
Fedora Jim 2005-01-04 . chapter 18
if you ever have one of your personalities kiss me again, i will STAP SOMEONE WITH A BURNING MARSHMALLOW! BOING! why am i alsays the last person to find out about relationship thingies like this? i won't kill you, (there would be no more chapters!! NO!) at least i'm hyper-rific again! WOO!!

THE PHONE'S RINGING!

*hi this is Anne's brother. I'm going to torture her and end her review before she gets back!!*
Longhair 2005-01-04 . chapter 18
Okay. Katie. Did anyone ever tell you you have one of the weirdest pen names ever? I'm not scared easily (well, by pen names...), but seriously. It does NOT fit you. Sorry. It's 4:10 in the morning and I have to be at school in like 2 hours and 40 minutes. Jazz band sucks.

So this chapter does some weird things, yo. If you like to read reviews before you read the story, good for you, but YOU'LL SPOIL THE MAGIC!

Yeah. I'll admit it. I like Hype. I feel like telling the world for some reason. I already told Katie. And SHE already told the world (as far as I know...), but still, I think I should stand in the middle of the street and shout it out. But the drivers on that street are horrible and I'd end up flying into someone's window.

So yeah. I may have gone too far with this chapter (the whole truth or dare thing... with the whole kissing thing...), but who cares? Only 3 different people read this anyway. May I remind you that it's 4:10 in the morning.

Well, this review's getting a bit too... stupid. Enjoy chapter 19, or if you already have enjoyed it... ENJOY IT AGAIN.

"It's 4:10 in the morning. Do you expect a good ending quote?"

Knowing Hype will kill him when she sees this...

-LH
Rhiannon Aurorafai 2004-12-23 . chapter 17
...don't ask why i did the dots b/c i just did. It wasn't my fault! blame anne! does anyone even know what i'm talking about? Do i know what i'm talking about? i dunno. hmm. 2 days till Christmas, which means two things of fluff and a sims game for my pc. Does anyone even know what the 12 days of christmas really are? i know of only Christmas, christmas eve, newyears, newyears eve, newyears day, boxing day, and two weekends. Anyways, good story person who i am reviewing for.Rhia/Katie
Rhiannon Aurorafai 2004-12-23 . chapter 1
Hi~I wonder about you sometimes, Joe. Both you and anne need to have a reality check. Of course, who am i to talk. I'm the girl who spazes all over the place and all my friends, esp. Bri think i'm insane.
lotrchic 2004-11-22 . chapter 1
wow. um sorry i havn't been able to read or write reviews for a while b/c school has been hell. on the good news, i've got 6 A's and a B. booya! oh yeah! of course that may be b/c i'm in liberal arts math, but that's beside the point. curse catholic schools! especially ones where the gate to hell is under the senior dock! but enough about me. i feel guilty for not having time to read/review what with crew and drama and homework...oops getting off topic again sowee. ok so i'll review more later. i wonder just how much i'm able to annoy all u peoples? oh well. ttyl. hey i rhymed!
Fedora Jim 2004-11-03 . chapter 17
ok...i need to not be normal ever again. did you know Party Quirks is dead? it got banned and i was also banned for a freaking week from ff.net! can i kill the head again? pweze?
my runescape thingy is lava_lamp04 and i usually hang around in world 11.
HEY i know Greg, he's the guy in band and science! and i'm supposed to stab people with spoons!
if i appear in your other story, feel free to call me Anne. or Hype. i feel like having an identity crisis right now. *wicked grin*
THE WATER MAIN BROKE! YAY! SCHOOL GOT OUT LIKE A LOT OF HOURS EARLY! GO WATER MAIN! *bows to the holy water main god (or goddess...is water main masculine or feminine in spanish? my brain hurts. or lack thereof...)
wow, here's a long spastic review in my native language!
ONV09AWD9AWIR398RKFNALK9FOIGNLDNFOAIHDOFAJ;LDMFG0OANB9REFALKDFIOAUFOFNOSDINC9EIU!
2+2=Purple...the end...hi...MWAHAHAHAHA! if you ever see anyone wandering around runescape who is called lava_lamp04 and is saying things like "mwahahahaha i am insane" or anything randomly stupid like that (my most recent is "i am lava lamp, slayer of evil scorpiens!) then that is probably me. say hi. then i will freak out and wonder who is stalking me. my brain (or lack thereof) functions like that. get used to it. o wait you already are.
BUSH WON!! JUST LIKE IN OUR STORY! AH!
Fedora Jim 2004-11-01 . chapter 16
maybe next chapter you can bash anonymous reviewer you hate!
the other song(s) by Evanescence is called Going Under, Bring Me to Life, Everybody's Fool, my Immortal, Haunted, Tourniquet, Imaginary, Taking Over Me, Hello, My Last Breath, and Whisper. thats all 11 songs on the album Fallen and i know all the words to all eleven of them. WHO'S OBSESSED NOW?!?!
(at Rabid LOTR Fans Anonymous) Hi I'm Anne a.k.a. Hype who is obsessed with whacking people with baseball bats and stabbing them with rubber spoons.
2+2=Purple, dammit!
CHEESE FOREVER!
Longhair 2004-10-23 . chapter 1
This is when I quote Graal.
To the anonymous review writer:
Racist dickhead, you should have been aborted as a fetus, you are but a flaw of
the human race. Your noxious odor, we presume, is to come from your
consumage of Industrial waste and trash.
FYAD.
- LH
(To all the real review writers who care about me and don't just go to random stories and post bad reviews for no particular reason: Chapter 17's up, wiggaz, so read, review, and make fun of that last guy
You pwn me...
-LH)
(none) 2004-10-12 . chapter 1
From the word go, your story sucked. It's not funny, it's lame and it sucks bad. You suck. SUck **.
Longhair 2004-10-11 . chapter 15
Omg! I'm writing a review from school!
Today's fun fact: No one cares.
Expect a chapter next weekend (or if anything, FROM SCHOOL!)
"N to the I to the TPI, to the C, K, Y."
-LH
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