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| DeathStorm 2004-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseCan definitely feel the pain in this one. My fav line, for some unknown reason: "Five days alone, and three months to go, The lonely chill is surrounding me." Love the descriptions at the very beginning as well. A beautiful job overall. YLG, DS |