Not many of my poems are based on religion. so far only two. so don't say you will not read them. That is an unfair judgement. and you hurt my feelings. I dont push my beliefs on others. I can understand where you come from though. so I will not take offense in that. You're poems are really well written and I like them. Especially this one. Its how I feel every day. Not a soul cares though. So, yeah. Keep writing. Thank you for your toughts on my peoms too. Even if they hurt a little.

There's a typo. "Who would care if yopu are gone anyways?" The p in yopu should not be there. Otherwise, good work.

Depression is a good source of inspiration! But the inspiration is the reflection... so then the thing you write turns out sad. Hm. I liked this poem, it was wonderful... er.. but sad. (It's so hard to review sad poems)