 RatherFresh 2004-11-02 . chapter 1really emotional. it's a really good poem, but i don't think it flows as well as is could. but i still like it. great job. |
 simpleplan13 2004-07-02 . chapter 1I liek it.. I hate looking in mirrors... and they dont lie, but you can perceive them differently than others |
 Goldentigerhawk 2004-06-21 . chapter 1 your poem was really good! It made me read it more then once:) please write more!!>^^ |
 MaCaHa2005 2004-06-14 . chapter 1I got the feeling it was talking about how you try to put on an image for the outside world and slowly that becomes to consume what you keep on the inside. I think it had excellent insight I enjoy reading it very much. |