Good story. You may just need to type up a sentence or so to show its finished.

nice story. is it complete?

pretty juvenile writing yet still one of my faves. :)

i love the story! i just wish you would update...four years is a long time...

i luved this story but i think it could of been longer!

I loved that story. It was awesome, totally my type of story.

Sophie x

Woah. That was good!

-screams- THIS IS AWESOME! YAY!

Aww. How said, she said she didn't mean it. Sadness ensues.

Fantastical! Yay!

Priceless! What an evil girl lol

i love you and your fics. the grammar might not be the best but the plot and the scenes make my heart want to flop out. you're a great writer with great ideas-thank god i landed at your page. haha. please keep on writing. an update soon wouldn't hurt. :D

it's cute but so plotless i could feel my brain dripping outta my ears

update soon now! God, i was so scared when they thought Kyvan was the father, im like 'oh hell no'. xD

Thank God!

okay, i adore your story, and you need to update, just for me okay? you rock!