Great poem lindz! 10 out of 10! I love how all of your poems are about pain, they are great! Everyone can relate to them because everyone has gone through pain before, some more than others, great job keep it up!

Excellent, so true. I find I often feel the same way, although I would be more creative with my methods...heh ::winks::

hm...sounds kind of heartbreaking at first but i can totally relate to this,especially when you said "Away from the world and into my own, I only wish you were here"...that line really pertained to me! thanks for sharing and keep writing!