That was the end? The end? THE END? The end to the whole story or just that chapter? Are you crazy? THE END?

Aw, it's over! ;_; Damn, no lemony lemonness... In my opinion, I don't think you rushed, or anything... oh poo... Oh well, I can look forward to your sequel to Thief of Hearts!

The fight was very interesting. Hm. Not much to say, but it was good again.

hey hon :) lovely chapter. (: ahh. i was looking through titles and your story title and user got me interested D am i glad i read your story :) good luck with the rest of the story. this is a thumbs up !

Very good story.

Oh dear, poor Pheobe! I feel bad for Derek too... Make things better for him! Oh... any lemons ahead? Just curious!
Keep it up!
J.M. Seeley

Oh yay! - You good at this, yes, yes! Yay! There's a sequel to "Thief of Hearts"? (does happy dance)
I can't wait for your next update (and that sequel!)
J.M. Seeley

heh, that would suck to get cought doing that...keep updating! cool story

Good story write more

Oh, please continue! This is soo good!
J.M. Seeley

I'm loving the 2nd chapter and I look forward to the 3rd. Email me.

yes! i new chapter! yay! i cant wait for the next!

update update update *chants*!

HEY! You finally wrote the story! Its about time!
I loved the first chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.

hey, i hope you make long and new chapters! it seems like a good story line and is a good and interseting subject (lots of stuff to write about that is)the only thing i might sugest is that you astablish the ages...i would assume around 17? well, so far so good! ill be waiting for the next chapter!