|Reviews for One Day|
| Ethereal Oceans 7/11/04 . chapter 6
call me and ill explain. cya!
| oh frenzy 7/10/04 . chapter 6
Ur evil! I thought chap 6 was really up goddamnit! GIMME CHAPTER 6!
| Star Kitty 7/9/04 . chapter 5
Okay not to offend you or anything but i did not like this story. You seem to have a talent in writing and the plots kinda good but you have so many things happening at once and you had Brooklyn fall in love with Luke after he raped her. A bit strange. Plus, the whole chapter about playing in the snow seemed a bit pointless. I'm not saying that you're a horrible writer whos stories are going straight to the trash bin. But I do think you could make it a lot better with a few adjustments. Plus, whats the deal with the whole, No Flames Welcome? Are you that insecure over your stuff? You need to lighten up. Welcome flames, critism sometimes helps stories.
| nothingness78901 7/8/04 . chapter 5
i loved it! keep writing! i wanna knoe wut happens.
| oh frenzy 7/5/04 . chapter 5
GODDAMN THIS IS SAD! SAD BUT GOOD! I LVOE IT UPDATE QUICKLY! LOL NOW! LOL!
| marshbar960 7/4/04 . chapter 5
hm...very sad again...yet i'm glad that jackson luke was there to support skye once and for all. anyway i sort of got confused: did the mother die or did jaden die? a little clarification wouldn't hurt. please and thanks!
| Artificial Refuge 7/2/04 . chapter 4
Please update soon! I like this story! Update? Now? Pretty please?
| Artificial Refuge 7/2/04 . chapter 3
Dammit, you're so good at twists and cliffhangers! I must go and read next chapter...
| Artificial Refuge 7/2/04 . chapter 2
Interesting twist! Poor girl. I hope Luke is as nice as he now appears to be...
| oh frenzy 6/24/04 . chapter 4
OMG LINDZ! THIS IS SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS STORY! THE ONLY THING THAT KEPT ME FROM CRYING IS THE FEW LAST SHREDS OF DIGNITY I HAVE AND THE FEAR THAT I'LL LOSE THE LAST FEW PRECIOUS STRIPS OF MASCULINITY I HAVE LEFT! LOL! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS STORY! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE IT SOON I WILL CLAIM YOUR SOUL TAKE IT TO HELL AND TORTURE IT ETERNALLY BY MAKING IT WATCH TELETUBBIES RERUNS OVER AND OVER AND OVER FOREVER! THEN I WILL FORCE YOUR PITIFUL LITTLE SOUL TO DO MILLIONS OF YEARS OF BACBRAKING HARD LABOR! DO YOU UNDERSTAND? GOOD! NOW GO UPDATE! NOW! LOL! OKAY YEAH I HAVE OFFICIALLY LOST MY FUCKING MIND! LOL! OH WELL! wHATS GONNA HAPPEN IN UR STORY? WAIR DONT TELL ME! UPDATE IT NOW! LOL! WELL I BETTER END THIS STRANGE RAMBLING BEFORE I MAKE MY SELF SEEM LIKE AN EVEN BIGGER FREAK THAN I AM IF THAT'S POSSIBLE LOL!
GOD OF LIFE AND DEATH
GOD OF LIGHT AND DARKNESS
KING OF ALL THE LAND!
| marshbar960 6/23/04 . chapter 3
good story so far but i can't wait to "meet the parents of skye" and what happens to jaden lynn. thanks for sharing and please continue writing!
| marshbar960 6/23/04 . chapter 2
well so far so good...hopefully jackson (luke) can keep his word...i'm going to read the next chapter now!
| marshbar960 6/23/04 . chapter 1
wow! God bless the naive! she fell in love with a rapist! Well I hope she soon wakes up and breaks it off, not to mention tell someone! thanks for sharing and keep writing!'
p.s. i'm getting ready to read the next chaper now!
| oh frenzy 6/23/04 . chapter 3
OMG YOU SAID MY CLIFFHANGERS WERE BAD? I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS...NOW PLZ! LOL PLZ HURRY AND UPDATE! THIS IS DEFINETLY MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR! I LAUGHED OUT LOUD AT A FEW PARTS! BOY, IT GOT A LITTLE STEAMY THERE FOR A SECOND LOL! YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER! SO MUCH BETTER THAN ME! I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE THIS STORY! NOW IM GONNA LAY AWAKE ALL NIGHT WONDERING WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT LOL THX! ANYWAY THX FOR WRITING THIS AWESOME AS HELL STORY AND FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ALMIGHTY UPDATE!1
| sleeping with ghosts 6/23/04 . chapter 2
Oh my god. She's in love with a rapist. Thats just twisted. I like it. write more. I want to know if he can help her or not. By the way I love her name.