Hey Kim! i promised to review your stories, rite? so... here goes:

I like this story! hehe especially since it has many interesting "scenes"*slaps self for thinking perverted thoughts*haha and i like the squaresoft characters too, makes me want to play the game ^_^if you plan to continue this, make sure you use more descriptions, k? like the one you use in gifts and curses is good ^_^

k... i'm out of ideas... so i guess that's all from me =) i like your stories! keep it up!ja ne kim-san!

o0o i remember this story! yesh yesh u print for me!! ^^- ok, uh, not bad...gramar stuffiez ho gives a **... anyway, Ish so kawaii!v -^^- ehehe...kissie kissie on da foreheadie...lol. ok well add more ROMANCE in it, it's fun tor ead. trust me. heheheh *dark glare>.>* YESH!

o...riku's mad!! lol...im bored..so yea...hey fearell, ho's the guy? kinda sounds cute u noe? lol...anyway...pl update! and update w/ tetra fx...! please! for me -_-! lol...anyway..hv a good day (cough cough)...
-hurricane

I think you should continue this story fearell. it's really hilarious, It made me laugh, like watching an anime laugh type ish. the nosebleed stuff, the flying boots! god, I can't stop laughing. I thought ch. 7 was gonna be a ahem* oh well. to be honest, I think there are too many guys here and they all sound attractive in Mia's point of view donntcha think? stick to one guy, youre making poor mia confuse about her feelings. the mystery dude sounds cool, i can't say he's hot, thats just wrong. keep it up and please update TetraF, i really like that one, because its about u and ur friends.

The fight is even better!*nod* it's a very good thing that Mia works in the kitchen...she's got knives that she can use too!

dude...do u really wanna continue the story..eheh..jk jk...
who wrote the last bit?
keep writing..
- ms.hurricane

Why isn't this in the Kingdom Hearts section in fanfiction.net? It's quite oriented around the relantionship between Riku and Mia. (Did I spell correctly?)

I know what Merdeka means! *flips History book* It means...something like independance or freedom is it? I know I learn something about Merdeka talks...
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I LOVE RIKU! HE'S MINE! MINE! MINE! MINE! MINE! But...he's not really mine! He belongs to Squaresoft! It's so tragic! *cries*
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Sora looks pretty cool in Kingdom Hearts 2. (Have you seen? I've got the wallpaper!) You know what? I have an ambition! A dream! *background music plays* I going to be a gamewriter! Design my very own game! Yay! Then I can have a character all to myself!!

Tidus? Hm...I WONDER where did THAT come from. *wink wink*

kim-chan...dey better do it...:( >tis tweena by d way< ooh and dat stupid will reminds me of pilip no baka. gr AJWRIEOJOAMFOAUW@$#@(&$@(&$(@!&! (huff puff...NYU!)
arrivedeci!!

kim-chan...dey better do it...:( >tis tweena by d way< ooh and dat stupid will reminds me of pilip no baka. gr AJWRIEOJOAMFOAUW@$#@(&$@(&$(@!&! (huff puff...NYU!)
arrivedeci!!

Okies, since this is the story of yours that i'm following, i'll review here! Your story's pretty good, thanks for reviewing mine! I don't like many hentai things, but yours i can actually stand. As for your questions about my story...only time will tell! I'll write more about it soon...just gimme some time...no, Pierre is not her lover! tootles!

I really like the story so far. It reminds me of my school days in elementary. Riku sounds interesting and will equals no comment. I really admire ur writing style and hope u can update sooner. all the best to ya.
ur not bad at writing hentai stories. lets jus say guys like me don't mind a little bit of hentai once in a while.

ooh, y dun u lyk riku? no punch him! i protect him! well, if he's worth it(grimaces)

*gasps* is this gonna turn out how i think it is? uh oh fingers crossed