|Reviews for Erase|
| invalid id 6/25/04 . chapter 1
Crazy I like, always a fan of crazy...evident by some of my own work. This has that crazy written in a daze/dream like state feel to it. Lost love and all. Kinda what I felt for my ex after we broke up. Just good writing overall.
| KM Barringer 6/15/04 . chapter 1
wow...powerful. I now know that I"m not alone, because this poem has really touched me...
| Amethyst Horizon 6/15/04 . chapter 1
this is going on my faves! i really love the last stanza, but i also love when you say "hopelessly loves a ghost"
great imagery! wonderful poem!
| Roberta Pryce Robinson 6/15/04 . chapter 1
Very sad, so completely understood, I've known those feelings too well! Very nicely done! Goddess bless!