 Abbreviations 2005-08-13 . chapter 1You actually managed to bring a tear to my eye, I mean, I'm usually so macho and...none...crying...like ((yeah, thats a lie)), but this was really sad and well written. I'm not sure how or if this is tied to your life, but it was obviously written in depression, so I hope as I am writing this that that sorrow has passed.
- Jeff |
 brainymandy 2005-07-15 . chapter 1How did you manage to cram so much emotion into one poem? Your writing style is so eloquent, so right for this type of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. |
 Holly-Anne-B 2004-07-30 . chapter 1dont ever tell me you cant write poetry again |
 this revolution 2004-06-30 . chapter 1Really sad, but pretty. You almost made me cry. |
 the-puppet-killer 2004-06-20 . chapter 1Its very well written and deep, saying goodbye to people is one of the hardest things to do. |
 Cherry Jones 2004-06-16 . chapter 1How sad but so beutifully at the same time
This is very good
Saying goodbye is hard
Just like all things are hard in ways like these.
SexyAngel |
 Kaliella 2004-06-15 . chapter 1This is so sad! It makes me want to cry, to read of such heartbreak and perseverance! My heart goes out to you for having to experience such pain! |
 PinkLamb 2004-06-15 . chapter 1You say I'm good! This is terrific! I love it...so much feeling and emotion...Job very well done!
~Daisy/Pinky/Whatever~ |