Oh wow! This is so cool! This is like the BEST abstract poem I have ever read! Ah ha! I caught something though... "sound crushing reality’s echoes against me"
The first letter of every word spell SCREAM! That is so clever and smart! WOW! You truly are a talented writer!
Hope to see more of your works soon! And UPDATE that story of yours...I'm still hanging in there!

I think the same too...I really liked it. Look forward to more.

Wow. That is honsetly one of *the* best abstract poems that I have ever read. Amazing. I love the scream line, and I wouldn't have noticed if you didn't use bold, so interesting idea. That's also the first time I've ever seen anything like that done.

That particular abstract really caught me, you have a gift.

heh I think this is your best poem, I do.. either this one or the other one I read. Um I think your idea of abstract is my idea of a good poem :P Hahaha I like it a lot- quote from my friend (she reviewed me), "I came, I read, I reviewed. wOOt." except it's more "i read. i loved/enjoyed immensely. I reviewed" wOOt! :D

I think this was interesting. Just another way to let people get inside yer head, huh? Thanx 4 reviewin my poem by the way!

nice...not really abstract, the few middle stanzas are clear...but like your beginning and ending better...
sound crushing reality's echoes against me...excellent line...
keep it up
T

Abstract, indeed. But I liked it.
I noticed something in this line:
sound crushing reality's echoes agaist me
The first letters of all of those words spell "scream". Coincidence? I think not. Very clever.
Excellent work!
*AbunaiChikara

its interesting. i like it. you have an original style. keep up the good work!

I just love this poem! I don't usually like abstract, but I thought I'd take a look... and I fell totally in love with this one! Who knows, you might have fuelled a new interest in me? Interesting and intriguing use of "scream".

_ Wow, that was really wonderful. Filled with such imagery, I enjoyed it that I did.
Maybe you should send some of your poems to a publishing agency... Honestly, I think you should try and do that.
Your poems are really intresting, and I enjoy them.

Farewell!

Wow! That was really awesome! I loved how angsty it was! YAY! :)

Nice little poem, I especially enjoyed the "scream" idea.

I hope you don't mind me reading all of these. They seem really personal. But I can't keep my mouth shut, and you deserve reviews! You're one of the best poets I've ever seen on this site. Clever work with the acrostic-like line. This one's my favorite so far.

nice, me likes abstract!