lol i hate not knowing what stuff says, so i translated the german online. for all those not fluent in german...well go translate it yourselves! "my father did not love me!" hilarious. all these good reviews must go to your head simon, but um, well i dont really have much criticism. oh fine, it was great.

O.o . . . That was good. Very funny.

Them Nazis and their yahtzee..whaddaya gonna do? I could spend countless hours critisizing your German, but ya know, I don't know German. And I'm not sure conjecation was the point of the story. For that matter, I'm not sure conjecation is a word. I wonder if Hitler had perfect grammer? One small critique...the word "schtillfund" was conspicously omitted.

O -- very interesting!
My favorite line has to be: "(The other three soldiers begin to enter, taking seats on the throw rug, lighting cigars and beginning to play cards as the scene progresses)"
As the scene progresses? I love that!
My German's not great - just enough to kinda understand :-b but I believe that in this line:
(General: FOR THE GLORY OF THE THIRD REICH! (fires several shots into the salesman. He falls dead.) Ach. . . got in himmel. . .
It should be "Gott in himmel" -- Gott is God in German, and it should be capitalized, with 2 t's.
Yet another amusing story. Keep it up!

Yahoo! Wonderful! Amazing! I love it! That's so awesome that the only way I can end a sentence about it is with exclamation points! Go you!

This play includes the word Schloedenhoffer. It deserves to be put into sainthood by the international church of awesome for that reason alone.

I bow to you as always...

This amused me more than words can possibly express. So I will not use real words.
w00t.
-Raven Oghma

You, uh... don't know german, do you? A lot of i looks like convincing jargon, but I think you have some actualy words. I could have my friend translate them... I should sometime... If i ever see her again...
Sorry.
The sad part is, I can see it happening, with a very Hitler-ish person as the general, and... yeah.