aw... what a CUTE story!! ^_^ I'm glad it wasn't too long, because i didn't have a lot of spare time on my hands, anyways.. but YEAH... it was super cute, although very predictable. I loved it, great job!
aww cute story. i think you could have made it longer and put all of that in more than just one chapter. draw the story out some ya know? lol well its good update soon and please read my stories.