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logical-unreason 2004-12-03 . chapter 1
"Blood. Drugs. Sexual abuse. These are some recurring themes in my writing. Yet my writing never gets repetitive."

Do some critical thinking about the two internal contradictions that are in that statement.

Change it.

Contact me.

Then maybe, just maybe I'll read some of your work.
tiger lily8 2004-06-19 . chapter 1
This was good. The father's anger and regret were all captured very nicely. Sad too.
zachy 2004-06-15 . chapter 1
that was so sad and very realistic. That situation is present everywhere around us. I loved this. Keep up the awesome work.
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