|Reviews for These I have loved|
| Lauren Wolfe 2/20/06 . chapter 1
Lovely, indeed...very good use of "accumulating" words...very, very good!
| KoolKitty 8/31/04 . chapter 1
Haha, this looks familiar... Isn't English hw a good way to get poems to upload? I like your ending - it was very original (and it rhymes, lol).
Hm - you were right. My poem "My Loves" was based on that poem... you're smart! (LOL!) I don't normally update my sites - I used to be fanfiction obsessed, (mainly HP) but I don't update anymore because I've given up on believing that writing good fanfiction qualifies as writing talent. But I'm glad you liked some of the stuff I wrote.
If you like, you can check out my fanfiction penname: xXAriaXx
Thanks for the review.
| Writer of Darkness 7/31/04 . chapter 1
Whoa, I love this. You have such a way with words, young artist. I also can relate to the poem itself, for I, too, have felt the pain of love, and I have not been the same since the beginning. I want what I cannot have, you see.
Anyway, you are an excelent artist, poet, writer. Continue to journey through your mind and to produce wonderful poetry.
Writer of Darkness
| RatherFresh 6/16/04 . chapter 1
this is really good. haha, you're a great writer, so keep up the good work.
Favorite Line(s): "The poetic justice/Of a God-forsaken world..."
gives me shivers, heh..
| Broken Puppet 6/16/04 . chapter 1
One word: Wow.