Lovely, indeed...very good use of "accumulating" words...very, very good!

Haha, this looks familiar... Isn't English hw a good way to get poems to upload? I like your ending - it was very original (and it rhymes, lol).
Hm - you were right. My poem "My Loves" was based on that poem... you're smart! (LOL!) I don't normally update my sites - I used to be fanfiction obsessed, (mainly HP) but I don't update anymore because I've given up on believing that writing good fanfiction qualifies as writing talent. But I'm glad you liked some of the stuff I wrote.
If you like, you can check out my fanfiction penname: xXAriaXx
Thanks for the review.

Whoa, I love this. You have such a way with words, young artist. I also can relate to the poem itself, for I, too, have felt the pain of love, and I have not been the same since the beginning. I want what I cannot have, you see.
Anyway, you are an excelent artist, poet, writer. Continue to journey through your mind and to produce wonderful poetry.
Writer of Darkness

this is really good. haha, you're a great writer, so keep up the good work.
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Favorite Line(s): "The poetic justice/Of a God-forsaken world..."
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gives me shivers, heh..

One word: Wow.