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Me Myself and Aye 2007-12-08 . chapter 1
You are so right. I'm sick of it too. If we really want to stop racism, then why do we promote reverse-racism?

Hats off to you for having the courage to be honest.
Bamboti 2006-03-05 . chapter 1
wonderful!loved it!i cannot tell you how many things i can relate to in this.i really liked it.

caryn
Wesley The Dark Prince 2005-10-08 . chapter 1
Although I agree with your issue I found this really really really poorly written. Far too amateurish, it came out more like a rant. And remember: never put entire words in caps unless its a significant title. Your 15, not 5.
Twiztid Nobility 2005-06-29 . chapter 1
I agree completely with everything "Proving a Point" said. As he or she stated "caucasian" is not a culture. There is nothing wrong with starting a club to celebrate your heritage, but as someone else stated... when the Europeans came to the "new world" they breeded with the Indians who had already been here and then with their African slaves, so who could really tell all that you're mixed with? I also agree with another reviewer who stated that you get to celebrate being white everyday. When you go to school, in history... one always learns about "great men"... yes, but "great" WHITE men. I disagree with "The Zaniak" about the "Black club" comment. An African-American club, maybe, but no one with good sense would start a "Black club". And no, nonwhites have, in no way, more privileges than whites. Although things are changing whites remain the dominant race and the majority. Your comment about how if one race wasn't a majority of the poor, another would be. Why aren't whites the majority of the poor, then? Rather than afro-americans and/or latinos? If we, as afro-americans [and yes, I am], had more rights that whites, we wouldn't be forced to live in slums and ghettos. As for affirmative action, I both agree and disagree with it. It does give minorities and women something of an advantage, but then if it didn't exist, how many old white men who own billions of dollars worth of companies and stuck in their old ways would actually think to hire a black or latino man? Or a woman of any color, creed, whatever. Point is... yes, racism against whites does exist, but the whites need to brush it off, because the white "race" did "start it". So now you have to deal with it. And again, as Proving a Point stated, you might wanna do a little more research before you try to write something like this again. Really. There's also a quote in the Bible, I can't quite remember it but basically what it says is everything your ancestors did wrong is still your responsibility. "...will be carried down seven generations" are part of the actual quote, word for word. So remember that next time you say something like "I shouldn't be punished for what my ancestors did to yours." or Why should I be held responsible for the actions of people years before I was even born? I don't agree with what they did, but no way will I pay for it, because I DIDN'T DO IT." as call me artificial put it. Like I said, the caucasians did indeed "start it" and now you have to stew in your own brew.
black 2004-09-24 . chapter 1
" I know I might have angered a lot of the so called 'minority' groups out there. But I do not give a damn. By avoiding issues like these, we will end up in Bradbury's world of Fahrenheit: 451. "
If you don't give a damn that you've upset us,then why do you give a damn that we've upset you?That's very hypocritical to write an ENTIRE essay on the fact that you don't like black clubs or latino clubs or any other club about race because they won't except white ones.And then say that you don't care that we've upset you
black 2004-09-24 . chapter 1
" I know I might have angered a lot of the so called 'minority' groups out there. But I do not give a damn. By avoiding issues like these, we will end up in Bradbury's world of Fahrenheit: 451. "
If you don't give a damn that you've upset us,then why do you give a damn that we've upset you?That's very hypocritical to write an ENTIRE essay on the fact that you don't like black clubs or latino clubs or any other club about race because they won't except white ones.And then say that you don't care that we've upset you
The Zaniak 2004-08-31 . chapter 2
I partially agree. I agree that it's stupid that a Caucasian club got shut down where a Black club wouldn't, however I completely disagree with the idea of a Black Club or a Caucasian club in the first place.
And I think that "Latino Film Festivals" mean that it's films in the Latino style. Ditto with Asian art etc. What exactly is the "Caucasian Art" style? European art, I'd agree with, but not "Caucasian art." Asian can refer to the region as well as the race.
http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1635980
-there's an essay that you might agree with. Drop me a line if you have any comments about what I've said...or just write a rebuttal chapter.
breakdown in the waiting room 2004-08-27 . chapter 1
Well, I agree and disagree with the statements you have made here. Let's start with the ones I agree with:
Yes, there is racism against whites. I'm mostly white myself (Irish, German, Italian, Blackfoot, Cherokee, Spanish, English. . .) and I've seen it and, at times, experienced it. But, also, every race gets discriminated against. So that's nothing new. But it is glossed over more when non-white people make racist remarks to white people. It upsets me just as much as any other type of racism, and really should be acknowledged with more, outrage be damned.
Also, I agree with the whole "ancestors" thing. Why should I be held responsible for the actions of people years before I was even born? I don't agree with what they did, but no way will I pay for it, because I DIDN'T DO IT. So deal.
I disagree with the statements about Asians/Latinos/black having more privileges than whites do. Uh, wrong. The dominating force in America is still the white, heterosexual male. Deal with it.
Also- Eminem isn't a "wigger," as one other reviwer pointed out. He really is from the ghetto, born n' raised in Detroit. An example of a "wigger" would be. . .have you ever seen Meet the Parents? If you have, and know about the character Denny, there's a pretty accurate example of a "wigger."
So, all in all- excellent topic for an essay. More of a rant, though, definitely needs to be rewritten, with sources cited, etc., but interesting topic. All it comes down to is racism is wrong, no matter who it's against.
Guess that's it! :)
-Jessica
Combat_Boot 2004-08-26 . chapter 1
You are so right! In North America, all the black and asian people are able to start clubs based on race, but if we do it, everyone harasses us like heck and everything!
Proving a Point 2004-08-20 . chapter 1
A wigger is not trying to be like Eminem.Eminem lived in the ghetto,experienced the streets,and has grown up to rap about it.
A wigger has never been outside any white neighborhood,does not actually have black friends,but black acquaintances,and will never be liked because he is not being who he really is.
BLACKS ARE A DOWNTRODDEN RACE.Don't you EVER forget that.**?** is when a white male is getting paid more than my black father simply because he is white.** is when a white male can beat a woman of ANY color to a job she had better ability to do.
I was born in South Bronx,The streets that prove that Blacks and Latinos are a downtrodden race,in a perpetual destruction.If only The majority would reach out to them because the majority,for the reason of them having the most money,can afford to do it.I wish you would go to Harlem,South Bronx,Brooklyn,in New York or Oakland and Inglewood in California or Glenwood and College Park in Atlanta.You would not be saying that blacks being downtrodden is **.If we have so much more oppurtunities than whites,we would not be living in the streets.Would we?People refuse to send the most educated of peoples to the schools in the ghetto.They refuse to perform drug raids and educate young girls on the dangers of premartial sex.They do not try to break up street gangs and preach unity through this world of black and brown.The majority of us are not down trodden.But some are and they need help.It was white man,specifically the head honcho of the US government,who relocated them there anyway.They wanted to keep minorities out of sight as not to upset the majority.I can prove that due to a confrontation involving a black female who wanted to sell houses in a predominately white area.The company turned her down saying they did not want to scare their white customers away by moving blacks into the neighborhood.
Affirmative Action should be abolished altogether.Although,affirmative action not only helps minorities,but helps women of ALL races.Good look trying to get that job against Blonde-haired,Blue-eyed six-foot tall man.He does not have a pretty face and breasts associated with sexual pleasure.
Caucasian.That is NOT a culture.The clothes you are wearing-made in china.The computer you're using-made in malaysia.The only American thing you can find in your house is a pencil.Caucasian does not define a culture.It defines a skin color.Caucasian literally means albino-without color.So if you want to set up an albino club,you do that.
BLACK SLAVES DO NOT COME FROM KENYA OR GUINEA.We would love to make a club for the specific region of which we came,but the fact is it is not of historical value.It is of the here and now and right here and right now,I am a black female.Also,even if we did wish to make a club with historical value,that still would not be possible simply because the whites who brought slaves to America burned the records.
I don't give a ** what your ancestors did.I do give a ** that you would like to consider the pain blacks feel about slavery is **.The pain runs deep when we think that we are here because our ancestors were to do whatever their slave master insisted.I am also part Jewish and I feel a pain about the Holocaust.I just can't believe the hate people felt towards Jews.Hitler wanted to make a blonde-haired and blue-eyed world and he did not have either.
When the declaration of independence was written,nobody considered the independence of women and blacks.we had to work to get our freedom.Don't act as if the American world is not shaped so that white man may always win.If you get a racist comment,shrug it off.It's not as if the are more important than you anyway.After all,you are the majority.
White man has subject many,including your Irish and Hawaiians,to brutal treatment.America is supposed to be the land of the free...white man,that is.I am not racist,but when it comes down to it,that is how it is.Look who ALL our presidents have been.If our world is changing,how come a president can't be a woman or a minority?What is keeping them from succeeding?
All in all,I am trying to say that your essay proves what little you know about other races.(Especially the Kenyan and Guinea Club.)You feel like we don't deserve to be treated differently,but we are,and it's not a positive thing.Race does matter because it does exist.We should not make it an issue,just like we should not make dieting,clothing,music,abortion,and etc an issue.We should just do whaetver we want.But that would create chaos and destruction and our fickle minds would easily give in to the largest,and smartest of us all-white men.And it would be this hell all over again,wouldn't it?So forget Fahrenheit 451.Let's look to Presidental Election '04!
I think that you feel as if that because you are white,you don't have any special place for you.That is true,but you can't go celebrating your skin,now.You have to celebrate your culture and as I pointed out before,you have very little of one.Whatever you've done has depended on the rise or fall of another peoples.Plus,we call you caucasian because europeans that came to america mix-bred and created different backgrounds.There is no sense in a German or French Club.No American is one of each.
How can you not give a damn that you've upset me?You say we have to address these issues.Can we address them with more knowledge and preparation first?Everyday I am learning about what a white man has done for our country and in February I hear a little bit about George Washington Carver and the peanut.Woohoo.Yeah,you've upset me and for little reason.My response was longer than your essay and made more sense too.
girl of death 14 2004-08-05 . chapter 2
a.) I love your name... ^.^
b.) Is that song Minority by Green Day? And if so, do you maybe have the second line a little messed up? Sorry heh, I just love that song. Oh well...moving on...
Yeah, anyhow I agree with you almost completely. However, I'm not part of any minority group, but I still see some racism going on.
Example 1: When I was 9, I was going to some garage sale with my grandma and as we pulled up to the curb, she glanced at the house, turned to my grandad, and said "No, keep going, we don't want none of that stuff. They're black people."
Example 2: Yesterday night, my aunt's friend had a discussion about how Cleveland city schools were a disgrace and no one wanted their kids going to school with "those black kids".
Also, the kids called "wiggers" are usually called that for acting like they live in the "ghetto" when they live in some nice, calm suburb.
Other then that, I totally agree with this. If people would stop with the ridiculous lawsuits and complaining about racism and slavery, life would be oh so much more peaceful! Yeah..I'm done now. Great essay! Farewell! -me-
Tiefling 2004-07-27 . chapter 1
Interesting. I think you have a point, but there's two sides to every story. Here in Australia people often complain about the special priveleges given to Aboriginal people, like Abstudy (study grants). On the other hand, the state of Aboriginal health is abysmal, their infant mortality rate is higher, far more Aboriginal people die in custody than white etc.
I support the existance of programs which exist specifically to help minorities, but I agree that it is hypocritical for things like 'Caucasian clubs' to be banned (unless the club had some sort of White Supremicist agenda). There is no such thing as 'reverse racism'. Racism is racism.
'I know I might have angered a lot of the so called 'minority' groups out there. But I do not give a damn. By avoiding issues like these, we will end up in Bradbury's world of Fahrenheit: 451. '
I don't see the relevance of that last comment. Today's climate of political correctness, while annoying at times, is a far cry from a world where all books are forbidden.
Liokae 2004-07-27 . chapter 1
I certainly agree with the sentiment, but I have to take issue with the fact that you're swearing - albeit mildly - in an article you marked 'G'. If you're going to do that, you need to mark it at least PG.
Guin 2004-07-27 . chapter 2
To cite the perfect example-
At my school we are no longer allowed to call 'Black boards' black boards. We have to call them chalk boards. However, the school has not changed the name of the white boards to pen boards. I definetly agree with you, so much of racism is because of people trying so hard to be PC that they really have cause to think about how they act in front of a person of another race.
WE shouldn't single people out and categorise them.
A good essay, and I think this is also true for other types of predujuice. Like how women are aloud to be sexist agaisn't men, but men aren't agaisn't women. Which are fing incredibly annoying even though I am female!
Liked the way you went through all the reviews.
Curtis 2004-07-27 . chapter 2
Great essay, I really liked it. However I wish to adress one of you reviewers.

Gia E:
Racism in rural North Dakota/ Minnesota doesnt go unpunished. I live in rural Minnesota, and racial prejuidice is not extremely normal.

Minnesota may have an extremely low minority rate, but that doesnt make the majority racial hating monsters. Hell, most of the racism to taken account is actually nationalism.. eg: Germans, not liking Swedes.

Trust me, dropping the N word (why do we give that word so much power?) in school does go punished. Teachers are very strict on racism.
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