Reviews for Rule Book to Life

Nemonus 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting! Not sure what your point about the Bible is but you pass over that. I like the phrases "Isn't there a rule book,/ Or maybe dice to roll?" :) Pretty good rhythm and such, though 'suppose' in the first lines should be 'supposed'.
Cambio 2004-06-16 ch 1,	abuseI can empathize (yeah, hoping i spelled that one right). Life is a hard thing to figure out. As for the poeple who seem to have "read it", be careful, sometimes they are just BSing. As for the "People are unhappy with the real me How am I suppose to change?" I hope you dont really believe that. Anywho, its an exelent piece. Keep up the great work! Who cares if its a result of late night?
Mistress Jakira 2004-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI feel your pain. lol Tinged with late-night-ness and perhaps needs editing and tweaking, but this is a very good idea. I really know how you feel here, and I think (or I hope lol) that everyone does--it seems like most people just absolutely know what they're doing in life and what they should do, and it makes others of us (like you and me lol) feel like we're lost without a clue. ^_^ I like it. ~MJ