|Reviews for Nothing But Oblivious|
| strawberryblitz 6/6/05 . chapter 1
WOWzie! I must say that I really enjoyed this one! Good work.
| crybabekrizz 8/8/04 . chapter 1
mixed feelings and thought right? between concious and insane. i totally agree! i think that all human beings are like that and i really lurv that trait. ;)
| flawed perfection 8/6/04 . chapter 1
I like how this was written. :D Keep writing!
| Thomas Morrow 7/10/04 . chapter 1
I like the message, its very good. The way you conveyed your idea was good. One problem, and I mean this as constrcutive critisism, your rhythm is chopy...the poem doesn't flow together like a symphony...poems should flow. That's all I have to say. Overall, good job.
| DarkenedLoner 6/26/04 . chapter 1
i really dont know what else to say except for its a pretty good poem...
| Blue Fountain Pen 6/25/04 . chapter 1
Wow! Very nicely written! I think the first three lines are a bit cliched, and when you read, you expect the rest of the poem to be that way, but it isn't. Still, I think the expressions in the first couple of lines are too over used, and could be changed. BFP P.S. I'm putting it into my faves!
| rising-mist 6/16/04 . chapter 1
it's great! i like it!
| wilderness 6/16/04 . chapter 1
this was a really nice poem! i like the lines and the way they are set out!
| crimsoninfinity 6/16/04 . chapter 1
That is so good. The way you led it on until the end, how you made exist and oblivious together... I love it. This was really really good, I enjoyed it.