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| Unholy Haven 2005-06-23 ch 1,   | This poem is a treasure! I'm just absolutely intoxicated with it, definately one of the best I've read. It has just exactly the type of sentiments and attitude that I'm looking for when I browse through this website. Beautiful, beautiful! |
| Sammy- B 2004-06-19 ch 1, | Wow- the wording is awesome, I love the metaphors. Great job! |
| Etheral 2004-06-18 ch 1, | This is good! The wording is absolutely fabulous! The metaphors are cool too. Great job dude! |
| morsmortis 2004-06-17 ch 1, | I loved the words you used in this poem. THey were very descriptive and beautiful. |
| JRVillers 2004-06-16 ch 1, | I love your metaphors: A dove with crow’s eyes, A speck on the monastery floor. your wordage is.. mesmerizing. moments with the libertine, and most wanton of them all... It is clear that you are in love with language, but unlike many others, you have a very astute grasp of it. As with Titanic Slumber, I am impressed. For some reason I want to see you write something, using your language and grasp, in the style of e.e. cummings. Have you read him? Let me know, I think you could have a whole lot of fun (and I would love to read it) I can't thank you enough for your reviews. Reviews are few and far between, but they are a driving force behind my writing. And you, reviewing several of my poems... I love you. |