dark, but good. You're good at writing about personal things... you have a good sense of feeling. I love your rhythm too. Almost a story in itself!
keep writing!
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i think that this is a very impressive write. it has a unique style and a strong voice. its very high in the quality of the content. good job.
i hope you will take some time to review some of my work as well.

Tha was awsome.