Oh...my god :D
That was awesome!! Is it just a one-shot or is there more?
Please let there be more o.O
Haha, anyways. It's very hot, and I love the ending. The plot developed more at the end, so that's why I was wondering if there was more.

Wow. I really don't know what to say to this except that it was hardcore and that it rocked.

Sad but sexy all at the same time... I almost feel guilty for wanting them to smex it up again xD

Nub~

Published and updated in 2004 huh? I guess that means this is a oneshot.

It was very good though!

i like it, very intresting. I'd be very intrested in reading more. GOod luck good job.

It made me shiver. I loved it.

That's incredibly sad, but I still loved it. It reminded me of the illegal sex trade in the southern islands, I was just watching something on it earlier. Very good job.

holy ** please write another chapter =( ill love you forever!

"Kazeem massaged his hand over the pale youth's thighs, rubbing his legs and tickling him with his feather-light touch. He kissed and nibbled at the ear breathing softly, urging quietly, whispering soothingly. 'Shh.'

Gagé trembled at the gentleness. The abuse he could bear but the soft tender caresses drove him to insanity. He was torn and confused in a way that no one else had ever confused him. He sighed, moving like pliant clay when the other boy gently rolled him onto his stomach."

Very Nyce for a one shot. I enjoyed it. ByezEnglish101

o-o if that is a one-shot I'll kill you... I'll do it too. I'm crazy.

LOved it!

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

it was SOO sad then it got SOO HOT... i LOVE IT great jobxOxOmeggo

this is truly a great piece. I really want to know more about what happens to Gage! Great descriptions; it was very beautiful.

I thought this story was beautiful, really truly great. I love the description and the way that it is written. This short story really gives a good setting for a much longer story about the whole male slave sex ring or whatever you would classify it as. I really enjoy your work, Lisette. Keep it up. =)

I'd like to know what happens, too. Does Sorcier basically "give" Gage to Kazeem? How do they learn to understand each other? And how did this story only garner 1 review? That seems impossible to me. It's so well written!