hey thanks for the review. very eloquently written...flows very well. I like the idea of how darkness will sorda make everything seem perfect. i kinda see it saying that when ur in darkness, all this physical beauty doesn't matter and no matter what something looks like, in darkness it could be this perfect... i like the theme of looking deeper than the shallow surface. very well written. keep writing!

Got me thinking alright. Marvelous stuff!

Makes you think.
I enjoyed this poem. It was very good. Keep it up.
ICT