o! tough one! on one hand, you could be saved and live happily ever after, on the other, you're brutally enslaved for all of eternity. hm, im not much of a risk taker, and so i think, i'd probably tell him no thank you and walk away. poor me if the world blows up, eh? anyway, this is really well written! i love it!!

Now that was food for thought. Something rich, and hot; something mildly salty that leaves you hungering... but for what? 'Twas good. Simply stated. It was enjoyed.

great ficlet Skippy. ^_^ Though I told you that when I first read it. I still think you should send it out as a mass email...but then again, that's just me.
Toodles!

a. i think i would keep my sole and
b. nice storey line i like it
i await your next chapter

Hmm... interesting idea. Very well written... I love the short sentences between paragraphs that accentuate your points.
I really hate to 'advertise' my own writing like this, but this reminds me of my story "Blind Faith," if you care to look...