|Reviews for heart pains|
| ADreamer'sCurse 6/24/04 . chapter 1
Great detail and an excellent poem! _
| AntiPleasure 6/23/04 . chapter 1
I like _ in all of it's simpleness and the nice free verse format I must say. Could use a little rhythm and a couple lines look out of place BUT my dear this is wonderful and I can feel your pain easily by reading this. Nicely done.
| Eagle Seance 6/20/04 . chapter 1
A strange way to be inspired, but a good poem nontheless. I liked the surrealistic atmosphere. Great work!
| Summerdazed 6/18/04 . chapter 1