Great detail and an excellent poem! _

I like _ in all of it's simpleness and the nice free verse format I must say. Could use a little rhythm and a couple lines look out of place BUT my dear this is wonderful and I can feel your pain easily by reading this. Nicely done.
Jenna xx

A strange way to be inspired, but a good poem nontheless. I liked the surrealistic atmosphere. Great work!

whoa!it's so...good!
summerdazed