Hey, thanks for reviewing my poem, it's really great to get reviews, always :p
I really, really like this piece, it's great. It's fairly simple, but it has great wording and great rhythm. So well done.
I have some other stuff up if you want to review it, it'd be great to get your opinion.
DB

hm, i like how you rhymed at the beginning and then at the end you just stopped and ended it right there. it works for the poem. good job

Forever may not be long enough for this life! Froever! Hee, good song, nevermind. I like it. A Very sweet and sincere. BTw, I also like the songs, but you're right, the printed one is a little better. TTYL : )

This is very sweet. You're right--Sometimes forever isn't long enough.