This is cool, cannot wait for more. Funny thing though: I wrote something for school: And titled it Twilightof the Gods. 5 months later, I find this. *sings* It's a small world after all!...Also, you do know that Twilight of the Gods is a mistranslation, right?

Woo ^.^ I'm glad that there are other people that write things about Norse Mythology. Great story with good descriptions. I hope you write more soon.

Hey Leanne,
I think it's good. It's not too much dialogue for the prologue. I like it. I think you maybe put in more of what each person is thinking or like facial expressions of the king giving his daughter away. [i know it sounds cheesy, but hye, give it a shot, right?]
hope this is good

nice chapter you have there i await more so writ more!

Short, but a nice plan. Has a lot of whaddaya call it. That stuff... uhm, yeah. Potential! Keep going, please... and oh, capitalise where you talk about, is it... the... uhm, gods against the Queen or something?

Hey, i liked this story. I have a feeling your getting your story idea's from other stories though. Like "Ragnarok" sounds like a name out of the epic "Beowulf". Also, the idea that if the baby was a girl, it would be given away to the witch, sounds an awful lot like "Rapunzel". And, the idea of the story of moses popped in my head too, even though i'm not religious. The idea that the woman gives away her child in order to save it. Anyway, those just came to mind while reading. But the story is still very good and interesting to read.