I liked the mood. It made me feel .. like a little girl LOL.

:D

Oh soo cool, i remember those days of catching fire flies too, such an innocent moment, i totally agree with this poem in the wondering, is it bad or good...i don't think we'll ever know...maybe when both are out of reach...i couldn't keep my thoughts together this easily, if i ramble, i ramble to the point of utter confusion...very nice

I really how the poem has all of the ...'s in there. it creates a nice feel and breaks up the lines a little bit. Nice questioning. I love how it's not really answered, you have a great ending. I like it a lot. I'll read the 'Dusman' story chapter 16 when i'm more awake and paying attention. thnx 4 the reviews *write on*!

Oh, really cool! Your descriptions of emotions, at least to me, tend to be dead-on. I also liked the use of ellipses (...) because it gave the whole thing a dreamy feeling. Good job!

Wow, this is very nicely written. Beautiful and thanks for the reveiws.

dry sherry... Cool! Anyways, great poem! I loved it! It's now making me think about who I am and stuff like that. My fav poem is Dreams. This and that poem are the only two I read! Tee-hee? Anyways, hope to read more poems! Well, see ya later, peeps *.*
ps. Have you ever heard of the anime series called Ranma 1/2? If you have, Ryouga's mine! Muahahahaha!! Well, see ya later, peep *.*

You got the feeling just right. It was all soft and lost.
>.< Sakiko
ps - kitsune ... gah, I give up.