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Selfish Tears 2006-06-22 . chapter 1
I love the transition from day to night. I'm surprised I noticed, sometimes those things slide past me, haha. It reminds me of a familiar feeling, it does.

I love the image of the tree. Right now, that's what's sticking out in my head..along with the last line, "I'll be waiting...", like there's still some hope left in her that things will work out. Don't we all have that hope, somewhere?
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