i loved this. your writing style is incredible... and this, well it seemed almost more like poetry than prose.

I read this, then, as if unable to believe you wrote this, I read it again. I read it over and over, searching for some semblance of structure or sense. I read paraghraphs, lines, words, all individually. I read it over and over, and then when stepped back I realized I'd spent the last 5 minutes reading the same sentence again and again I realized. I love this poem. I read it one more time, out loud. Everything came together. I'm not sure if what I took away from this is the same as what you put into it. But for 10 minutes I finally understood why people spend so much time reading poetry. It's for the few minutes that you look at the writing and wonder what it all means. Then almost as good as the last minutes, it's for the moment you realize exactly what the writing means to you. This was a very thought provoking poem. And really that's what they're all about isn't it? Hope this wasn't some overly philosophical review, but really: It got me thinking...
And then my computer froze and it took me 10 minutes to finnaly get back online and write a review, damn I hate laptops. Love this, keep writing. I demand it! Er... yeah sorry... =D

Wow. The last sentence is killer. So good. Wow.

Aplause from me. That was some of the most beautiful aranging of words that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It was a bit obscure as to what you were saying, but that added to the beauty. I had to read almost each line more than once, but it was beautiful.
Excelent job.