Reviews for Legacy of the Dark Heroes

Reviews For: Legacy of the Dark Heroes

Tasyin 2004-07-03 ch 11,	Very good descriptions with all of it. It's really progressing nicely, and can't wait to see more. Already said this basically, but thats ok :) ~Tasyin
Jessie My Love 2004-07-01 ch 10,	LIKE I SAID ON THE FORUM GREAT JOB! yea...thats really it...yea
FrozenBlossom 2004-07-01 ch 10,	Hm...Very good chapter. I hope you plan on updating soon. Write lots!
FrozenBlossom 2004-06-30 ch 9,	Nice chapter. Hope you update soon. Write lots!
Jessie My Love 2004-06-30 ch 9,	yea i think you are rushing their relationship in kind of fast you should start it a little later in the story, like kind of come up to the poinst because all you did was in the last paragraph say that he liked her. You have to work up to the point other then that awesomly cool. B~bye ~*Frosty the Wolf Girl...lol...laughter
Jessie My Love 2004-06-28 ch 8,	awesomly cool chapter...hmm i haven't replied on the forumyet i think i will do that next. Well like i said good chapter...actually i said awesomly cool chapter but same differance...not really but still. Now one thing i have been noticing in your work is you keep getting better. Are you going to post some of the stories you have on planegate here i think you should such as hunter thats a good story...well at least i think that is what it is called. Well i won't leave a long review at the moment so well B~bye
FrozenBlossom 2004-06-28 ch 8,	Another good chapter. Kind of confusing at first because you don't know any of the people but you learn who they are as you read on. Write lots!
FrozenBlossom 2004-06-27 ch 7,	hey! I really like the story so far. Lots of dialogue, though I really don't mind that. Hope you update soon so I can read on. Write lots!
Jessie My Love 2004-06-27 ch 7,	that was a great chapter i loved it, and i especially liked how you ended it. I thought it was very good. Well keep on writing B~bye
Jessie My Love 2004-06-24 ch 6,	awesomely cool chapter. Oh and i posted the next chapter in my story. Oh but in it instead of Legacy of the Dark Heroes it says Farrah so i don't know if it will work or not...but okay. Great chapter very very descriptive it was a little confuising when they were talking about the Dark Heroes but the rest was quite clear. You have been improving on every single chapter. Well B~bye ~*Me
Jessie My Love 2004-06-23 ch 5,	Hiya, I ROCK? aw, aren't you just the nice person. OH and i was going to post the next chapter today but when i try to uploud it none of my quatations show its freaky. And your mom is always on the computar, WOW, my mom barely knows how to work a computar lol. I always have to help her...which is not a good thing. Well great chapter i really liked it. Even though it still was a little short. i love your style of writing you serously have such good talent i envy you lol. Your chapters have been making a lot of sense only a little confusing at some points, and i really don't think that there is that many grammer errors...but hey i suck at language so you don't want my opinion on grammer. Hurry up and post the next chapter, and i promise you i will post my next chapter as soon as i can. Well B~bye ~*Me
Jessie My Love 2004-06-21 ch 4,	hiya, great chapter and i know what you mean by you just had to have the dialouge. Oh i am finishing the next chapter for Bound by a Slave right now. It should be up later today i am just putting in all of the thank you. I would have finished it esterday but my computar got messed up and my mom had to restore the whole computar which took like 5 hours...so there is my excuse. I really did like this chapter because you are starting to get the characters to know eachother which is a very good thing. Well i got to go. b~bye ~*Me
Jessie My Love 2004-06-20 ch 3,	I cannot believe that other people are not reading this i mean this story is so good serously and i am not just saying that to make you happy. This story has gotten a lot better since the first chapter. You are such a talented writer. I love the format you have been using and you have been putting in good idalouge along with very good descriptions. You know what...next chapter in my story i will tell everyone to come read this story...yea that is what i am going to do, and then maybe you may get some peeps to review. i'll try that i am going to be posting the enxt chapter sometime this week so keep checking well B~bye ~*Me
Jessie My Love 2004-06-18 ch 2,	So you are here to please...oh and yes i did like the dialouge because oyu had a lot of dialouge and a lot of just explaining stuffers..okay that made no sense whatsoever, but you may have known that already lol. Well like i have already said this was a great hcapter i liked it more then the first chapter, but then agian that is usually what happens because a story aslways gets better once the actually plot gets going. And yet agian you most likely already know that. You know i just keep tellign you stuff that you already know sigh what is the point...OH YEA the point is to make you happy. I mean what writer doesn't like to get reviews. Well I got to go know so well B~bye ~*Me
Jessie My Love 2004-06-17 ch 1,	First of all this sotyr is worth writing especially by you! This story was a very good chapter. It seems like it took a lot of time to write it but hey that is just what i think it may be differant in reality. There is nothing that you can improve on really but in later chapters i hope for some dialouge i personally favor dialouge because i like the conflict between the characters but yet agian that is just my opinion. And you know what i don't get is how this story has like no reviews serously you are such a talented wrtier..grr evil people...wait some of those people are nice and review my story and such...okay well...you get what i am saying right? okay maybe you have no idea what i am saying but still that is not my point...or well i don't htink it is. Well I gots to go know i am getting kicked off. glares at sister okay well B~bye ~*Me P.S can you please read my ficcy pretty please?

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