hey, this was rather disjointed, or perhaps thats simply the way I read it because thats the way I'm feeling, either way I liked that feeling and it seemed to work for me. The line about imagination being more motivation than reality was just great as well, that was pure genius, I loved it! Still are your poems are always a struggle with me to work them out, perhaps thats cause I try and figure out where they're comign from now, and I dont' just feel the way they're going...know what I mean? Okay, perhaps I'm just rambling. Anyways, I think it was a good poem...oh yeah, I also really liked to imperfection thing and the dreams in the sky...for some reason that seemed to click with me...anyways, keep on writing, it gives me something to do!

Great to see you again. What can I say about this poem? Like everything else, it's just completely wonderful. Your poems always delight me, they're just written so perfectly. I love it- "foolishness is my forte". Beautiful.