Wow. So sad so pretty so...pretty. The only thing that bugs me though is I think you should put a ... on the end of the 'because' before the last stanza. The word because and then nothing kinda says that you don't really know why, but the one period has a really annoying sortof finality to it. So why was the angel sad?

Wow...that was so sad...and meaningful too. The poem relates to so much sadness and pain, and it is also very deep. Keep up the good work. Thanks for revewing too.

How beautiful! You write very good poetry! I'm impressed! I wish I was this talented! Keep it up! _